Friday, August 12, 2011

Do you think this is forever?

my brother's crazy ex took me to court to try and get a restraining order against me (for no reason other than I asked to be a part of my neices life) and the judge suggested that we sign an agreement not to communicate with each other or step within 20 metres of each other's houses instead of going through with the VRO application.I agreed to sign apon advice from the judge that I could take her to family court to get visitation with my niece. well a few week after court I started ringing around to get advice and rang the family courts to find out what to do and they called me back and told me that aunties have no rights when it comes to visitation... what am I supposed to do now? do you think this signed agreement would be forever or for a fixed time? (i do not have a copy of it nor did it state any period of time)

Can Someone tell me what is wrong with my cat?

my cat is 13 years old, and is a very vocal(loud) cat. but now he can bearly let out a meow and when he does it is like a little croak. Please help me.

I lost my sex drive for a long time, now it's back and I feel like a hungry beast. 24/7 it's all I think about?

Could you be having a Manic Episode? I hear 2 symptoms -increased sex drive, elation, and maybe the change from shyness to bold...been on a shopping spree lately? Weight change or appitite change? etc?

Was he Enchanted to meet me?

He's showing all the classic signs of liking you! If I were you, I would try to get together again, just the 2 of you and see what happens.

Critique requested: all opinions respected!?

Aside from some fragments and minor grammar mistakes it wasn't bad, not something i would read, but good. It's a good start, though aside from the cliche name and the fact that its plagiarized. I do hope your planning to put this on fanfiction.net because then it's not plagiarized, then it's fanfiction. But try not to make her into a mary-sue....well too late.

Will you take some time and comment-on/criticize/rate the poem I wrote [typed]?

I really enjoyed your poem, Its deep in its thought. I so agree with you on where is the action.Words don't mean anything with-out action behind them. If I'm reading into it correctly.(if not please don't take offense, I really like it.) You are a pretty good writer. Good luck! I give you an 71/2 out of 10

What do you think of this start of a story [:3] ?

Human bodies have a lot of water in them as well... You might need a few words of explanation as to why Quill doesn't freeze herself - or perhaps a thought from her that even if she does that, it's better than what the monster is going to do to her.